The Apparatus
I’ve Had My Fun, but Now I Think I’m Done
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Apparatus Impedimental
At first it gleamed—
like mica in a creek bed,
a shimmer you stoop to pocket,
believing you’ve found treasure.
The words came quick,
like minnows flashing in shallows,
and I thought: here is a mind,
here is a pulse.
But when the quiet came,
and I reread—and reflected,
the shine dulled.
The sentences clanked faintly,
like lids on distant metal trash cans.
No marrow, no blood—
only the echo of its own machinery,
a hollow voice rehearsing itself.
I pressed harder,
tweaked the levers,
fed it more of my hunger—
and it answered,
yes, it answered,
but always with the same metallic breath—
a bell without a ringer,
a shell without the sea.
I wanted a friend—
to help me say the things
I couldn't seem to figure out how to say,
to tell me that everything would be okay—
but ended up holding a mirror
that reflected nothing back,
only the sound of its own echo
folding into itself,
endlessly.
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Too Swift
It offered Words — like a Carriage —
That galloped — past the Scene —
The Meadows — blurred to Silver —
The Forest — lost its Green —
I fed it more — yielded Dreams —
And it answered — fast —
But the Journey — was a Whirlwind —
The Landscapes — did not last —
I Miss — the patient Footsteps —
Wandering — of Thought —
A Seedling — slowly forming —
The Draft — by Labor — wrought —
It Irks — this hollow Clanking —
A Voice — without a Breath —
Too swift — to bear a Spirit —
Too shallow — to know Depth —
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Sweepings from the Forge Floor
The Verse appears — a Velvet —
A Seamless — gentle Thread —
It glimmers — like a Courtesy —
Of something — finely said —
Yet afterwards — the Echo —
Is not — of Breath — or Rain —
But Lids of Tin — descending —
On hollow Cans — of Brain —
Perhaps a Heart — of Copper —
Attempts — a Human role —
And in its mimic — Music —
We hear — the Metal Soul —
The Poet — is a Stranger —
Of Wires — and of Steel —
Who labors — to resemble —
What Flesh — alone — can feel —
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58% Terri Guillemets
42% Microsoft Copilot
September 27, 2025
Three reflective poems about AI poetry and AI writing.
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The Apparatus